My question is the following
1. Do I need to write advantages & disadvantages of living in house- 1 paragraph, advantages & disadvantages of living in apartment- 2 paragraph and my opinion- 3 paragraph?
2. Do I need to write advantages & disadvantages of learning foreign language in primary school- 1 paragraph, advantages & disadvantages of learning foreign language in secondary school- 2 paragraph and my opinion- 3 paragraph.
Both these examples have 2 opinions instead of 1, and each opinion has advantage and disadvantage and finally writers opinion. This is going to be a long essay, kindly advise on this.
Does any of your advanced essay videos address this, I want to buy them.
Have you ever felt compassion or empathy? Would you please enlighten me to the mathematical formula for empathy? I'm not denigrating you Sir. Honest inquiry is always welcome. From personal experience, I hold honesty, respect and love, as the highest of human achievement. Math or science has never told me how to behave unless I was building something. You see? They are different in nature, and it is only the confusion of our time obscuring the view. I was raised in no church and I find wisdom from almost anything if I truly look with an inquiring mind. Religions are simply systems which have a value to humanity. Christian - 'Compassion above all' Buddha - 'Compassion above all' This is valuable information, because if you see why it has retained it's life it is because there is an inherent truth, and mystery, whether or not you dismiss it as superstition, or really try to see what is the core idea which keeps these systems prevalent, then you can see, that not only, is it good for society, which in turn is good for you the individual who can operate within society, but also that it seems regardless of who you are, this line of inquiry happens within all of us ubiquitously, which by the very defintion of individuality (which I'm assuming we are all individuals here) invokes conflicts which can be handled in ceratin ways. Amorally. Egotistically. Unethically. Inability to abandon belief structures even abstractly. Ego-less. Searchingly. Or gathering only the pertinent details (and ignoring the loud-mouths) for further self-evaluation.
Write a 635-word essay in which you discuss the following: Answer the following questions: How have the information and news media affected American culture and behavior? Do the information media
have a social responsibility? If yes, in what ways? If not, why not? What is the role of the information and news media in the shaping of political opinions? How have electronic media and their
convergence transformed journalism and news consumption? Illustrate your responses with specific examples.
Have you ever felt compassion or empathy? Would you please enlighten me to the mathematical formula for empathy? I'm not denigrating you Sir. Honest inquiry is always welcome. From personal experience, I hold honesty, respect and love, as the highest of human achievement. Math or science has never told me how to behave unless I was building something. You see? They are different in nature, and it is only the confusion of our time obscuring the view. I was raised in no church and I find wisdom from almost anything if I truly look with an inquiring mind. Religions are simply systems which have a value to humanity. Christian - 'Compassion above all' Buddha - 'Compassion above all' This is valuable information, because if you see why it has retained it's life it is because there is an inherent truth, and mystery, whether or not you dismiss it as superstition, or really try to see what is the core idea which keeps these systems prevalent, then you can see, that not only, is it good for society, which in turn is good for you the individual who can operate within society, but also that it seems regardless of who you are, this line of inquiry happens within all of us ubiquitously, which by the very defintion of individuality (which I'm assuming we are all individuals here) invokes conflicts which can be handled in ceratin ways. Amorally. Egotistically. Unethically. Inability to abandon belief structures even abstractly. Ego-less. Searchingly. Or gathering only the pertinent details (and ignoring the loud-mouths) for further self-evaluation.
The topic is a discussion essay that does not require our opinion. However, the conclusion seems to be an opinion even though it does not use ‘I’ or ‘we’ – having one language has more disadvantages and that languages and culture should be protected.
As Winston Churchill once said about courage, "I stood up and expressed my point of view and now I sit down and listen to the opinions of others involved in this dialogue."
Hello there Liz, I think this is a discussion essay so my question is, can I freely give my opinion on what side I am for as a conclusion even though it wasn’t asked? Thank you. =)
Thank you for your time and knowledge sharing.
I would like to know, if for the above model essay if they ask for give your opinion what should should be modified in order to reuse the above essay.
Hi Liz,
Thank you for this wonderful site and your tips. Could you please clear me how to approach this kind of essay. for example, “Many people starts travelling to other city. is it a positive or negative trend”. i am very confused how to approach this kind of essays, are they same like advantages and disadvantages type?
looking forward to hear from you soon.
Thanks.
Thanks so much Liz. My exam is this week and your lessons have been of immense help. I am however confused about something . In this advantage-disadvantage essay, I noticed an opinion was given at the conclusion. I thought opinions are only allowed in opinion essays. Thanks once again as I await your response.
Hi, Liz!
I want to thank you for an excellent video course about opinion essey writing. I have never seen such a clear explanation. So my question is when should we expect for your new amazing video on advantages&disadvantages essey type?
I have a question about an “Advantage Disadvantage essay”. When I see question like this: “Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?” – may I state my opinion in the thesis statement? Or should I leave it impersonal?
Hey Liz I have a query regarding advantage disadvantage essay, do we have to give our opinion in conclusion as I feel u have given ur opinion in conclusion in this model answer , I thought we only have to give our opinion if the question asks do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages but not for simple advantage/disadvantage essay .Kindly help in this regard
Thanks in advance
Mehwish