Global Warming: An Introduction. Many researchers, scientists, and environmentalists are expressing concerns about changes in the overall climate of the earth.
Recycling has always been a matter of helping the environment to have a sustainable community, it is the number one action we can do for the environment, the economy and our future for this planet.
hey Liz , first of all i just want to say that i cherish you, this is such a great site, and i am learning so much from you, thank you very much, however i just need to ask you something about this task which i have rewritten it in my own words (kind of a practice ) : is it okay to talk about the detrimental effects of social networking sites but then adding another opinion which is : “that some people find it beneficial for example because it lets them explore other cultures and being exposed to new global ideas….”
Thanks for your videos and the excellent explanations. I watched this video twice and i have a question with the backround statement part, which said “…method in developing and improving health” at the 1st time of the writing, then when you wrote the entire introduction part it says “…method to developing…”. Firstly, what is the rule for using to + verb. ing tense? Im really not familliar with that use, and do the two versions have the same meaning?
when I want to show the opinion of people of the importance of something (like recycling process ) to be prevalence around the world can I use this clause :
believing on it’s importance, many people perceive it is crucial to depend this process all around the world .
It is so easy to watch how did you write task 2 in the video, but in fact, for me, it is much harder. 🙂
So this is my introduction paragraph. Could you please kindly help me to check and give me some advice:
You should spend at least 5 mins planning your essay and all points. Then the introduction should take just a couple of minutes. Paraphrasing should be very quick for the background and the thesis should also be quick because you have planned your answer. The body paragraphs will take longer because you need to think a lot more about your grammar and use of English as well as linking.
“The prevention is more important than cure that why the government should reflect more money in the prevention. In my opinion, I do not agree with this.”
On the one hand ,there are ample reasons that why individual should think about tomorrow. First of all ,nobody knows that how long years he would live so,he/she should save money which will aid to fulfill the needs of old age because amenities of old ages are more than affabilities of youth like health problems ,food ,shelter and so on .Moreover ,we cannot work full time life because age of retirement is already fixed .After retirement ,old people more commute to meet their friends and relatives .Furthermore ,one person have to accomplish the needs of family .Therefore ,if he/ she will save some amount of income the he/she caters good education for his/her children .Also individual can invest save money on marriage .Therefore ,he/ she will not have to need to take bank loan.
It is thought that the prevention of illness is more important than cure which is why the government should give it more funding. In my opinion, I do not agree with this as some diseases cannot be prevented and treatment is essential.
The subject of……is generating a lot of controversies nowadays. While a group of people opinion strongly for it ; opponents are also found to be consistent. In this essay I will look at these views first before I conclude with my own opinion….(as a introduction)
[what word should I use here?], I have a question regarding your sample introduction paragraph where you used “In my opinion, I agree … “. I feel like its not making good sense, as we cannot just combine these 2 clauses. For instance, we can instead write: In my opinion, regular physical activity is indeed the most effective routine one can adopt to enjoy a healthy lifestyle; or we can paraphrase it like: I agree and strongly believe that daily exercise is the key to a good health. Please correct me.
Its very helpful to see your videos. Now i have a question regarding introduction.
1. Do we have to write the only the paraphrase of the question whether the question is?
2. What we have to do if the question say about an argument directly like
“Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree”
I write like this “Many people believe that government should pay a lot of money to improve our railways more than roads. I believe that’s the good idea to expand money to the railways not in the roads…”
is this type of introduction correct or not.
Mam please give some suggestions because i feel worried about writing.