++ And also, in the body 2 part, I want to include a quote that lots of personal trainers and internet shows – that successful weight loss is a result of 80% diet management and 20% exercising. So healthy diet is actually quite important.
Could you please make a proper sentence with this information? I want to make a formal sentence however don’t know who I would say as a quote provider… 🙂 Thanks!
I had exam today. Think i made a blunder by presenting my position in conclusion only. I didnot use word agree/disagree to some/great extent. Instead i wrote ” i think women SHOULD be given liberty….” taking clear position in favor of one side. will this cause me loose marks??
Is it absolutely necessary not to use the same words from the question in paraphrasing the question statement? Or you can use some words like in your intro where you used the phrase “some people think that” which was already used in the question statement. Paraphrasing eats up a lot of my time so I was think may be I could copy some part of it instead coming up with words to use.
If you partially agree, then you will state that while you think the solution offered is good, there are other solutions which are better (obviously not in those words).
The skill of paraphrasing is about deciding which words to keep the same and which words to change. Not all words need changing. But definitely do not copy long parts of the sentence. Just write it in your own way.
first of all I would like to thank you for your excellent resources! I have noticed now twice that I sort of misunderstood the question, or wrote a paragraph about something I am no longer sure is relevant.
I think your ideas are fine. They are relevant and clear. The key will be how well you explained them and developed them. For writing task 1, it is always essential that you prepare all types of task 1: maps, diagrams, tables, pie charts, line graphs, bar charts and multiple tasks. I’ll keep my fingers crossed that your results are ok 🙂
Look at the question and see if it is past tense, future or present. You should also offer other tenses such as perfect tenses and conditionals.
It is not asking you to write about both sides – do you agree or disagree? Which one? What do you think? Your whole essay explains what you think.
This is a direct question essay. Your task is to answer the question: To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? ”. Your whole essay explains your answer to that question.
There are many risk factors that can affect one’s health, one of this is obesity and overweight, which become a threat to the health of many individuals. It is often thought by some that the most effective method to resolve this issue is to impart and include physical education lessons in school program. In my opinion, I agree to the statement, because I believe that, once these students become aware and educated about the health benefits of daily exercise, can eventually influence their parents and relatives at home. I also think that daily exercise together with proper diet could achieve optimal health status.
Thanks for your advance lesson. I have watch your advance lesson: agree and disagree essay. Since the essay question has only one opinion to agree or disagree, but what if the essay question like this one: ” Some people claim that not enough of waste from home not recycled. They say that the only way to recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? ”
what should I plan my answer? I have difficulty to identify which opinion or fact in order to respond to the question. Thanks Liz and I hope, I’ll get response this time.
As a medical practitioner, I believe that prevention is better than cure, I know for the fact that, daily exercise and physical activities can reduce the risk of acquiring heart and other related health problems, by burning the excess fats from the body and activating our heart to pump more blood thus improving circulation and metabolism. Therefore, educating and giving awareness to the students and young generations could really help them and save them in acquiring future diseases such as diabetes mellitus, hypertension, vascular and heart problems. I also believe that once these students or young people become aware of the beneficial effect of daily exercise in the body and educated they can eventually pass it and influence their family members. By this, we are not only saving the future generations but also the adult member in their families.
Sure. Some teacher recommend having only one sentence. Personally, I think you should make that decision in your test on the day and depending on your essay. If you are worried about word count, have two sentences instead.